Monday, June 04, 2007

I'll Remember!!

I know you are going to walk out of that door,
I know you'll never turn back,
I know what we shared can never be relived,
I know what we said can't be said again.
But I'll remember it all..........
I'll remember your smile,
I'll remember you dancing eyes, when you laughed,
I'll remember the tremors in your voice, when I breathed close to you,
I'll remember the pace of your heart, when I felt you for the first time,
I'll remember everything about you....
Your laughter, you tears,
Your anger,your calm,
Your joy,your sorrow,
I'll also remember your parting gift,
I'll remember your last smile...........
Your Last Kiss!!

15 comments:

Vandita said...

simply beautiful n honest....but sam kahan se aate hain aise ideas... who will u remember? [;)]
lol...its lovely though
love vands

Sam said...

ummm........... dekhte hai!! none for the time being!!!
thnx for ur compliments!!!

Aashi Joshi said...

hmm...vandta is ryt..bluntly put..its beautiful :) it shows your a romantic guy..thou yeh u really dnt need someone in perticular physically to write lyk this.....just hope you find someone to match this aspect of urs ;) nice one namesake :)

DumBum said...

sigh!!! u reminded me f my mom funny enuf... i knw ds is a romantic poem magar i guess i luk at it dfferently... its really is lovely...

sam said...

@aashi: u crazy namesake??? I don't want anyone lyk.... not to go away once she has come into my lyf!! but, thnx anywyz, coming from u, i knw wot it means!!

@mann: hey mann!! though i wrote with a romantic intone, but i daresay, u force me to look at it in a differnt manner.... just goes to taht there are different ways to look at things, each equally beautiful!! thnx!!

Aashi Joshi said...

i never intended it tht ways namesake n u knw it :P but really isnt it bettr to have sum1 youd luv soo much..rther than stick n comprimise

Madhavi said...

phewwwwwww i cn now commnt here 2din se uffff nwyz grt wrk....kudos sam saheb....khub bhalo...:D

SEO Engineering 101 said...

Remember the last kiss...

as it may really be the last... especially so... be it alive ...or the parting kiss to the grave.

Reminds me of this song in Malaysia ...

literally translating :

By The Pier which is Silent, A witness,
And the Time I kissed your forehead, out of love,
And Slowly you let my hand go,
And there I see, that of the tears pouring , trickling from your lids...


....the rest.. I will tell if you ask.

azrin @ http://www.azrin.net

sam said...

thanks for ur beautiful comment!!
btw, i wud like to know more about that song!!

sam said...

@madhavi: thnx a lot buddy........ finally tussi aa hi gaye!!

Cuckoo said...

Beautiful lines !!

I know you are a romantic person just like me & have written it with those thoughts but this one fits well for otherwise also.

Keep it up buddy !!

sam said...

yeah!! it does fit in... but den i gotta tweak it a lil bit to fit into the otherwise mode completely!!

Dazzy said...

it is always pleasurable yet painful 2 read wat u hav penned down...its kinda being face to face wid reality...kinda seeing "pain" naked.

Pri said...

couldent be true!
memories can never be forgotten...nor can they ever be replaced...

*smiles*

Sam said...

@dazzy: ummm... am sorry if it causes pain to you... but den, the theme of the poem does ask u feel the pain of the fellow in der!!

@pri: true, very true!! people may come, people may go...
but their memroies will forever remain!!