Wednesday, June 20, 2007

But forever!!

Looking out into the open valley
I can see the clouds form across the sky
Fear grips my heart,
Pray, fear not!
It wouldn't be for me,
For little do i care about that,
As long as you are safe.
And now I see you gripped
In a multitude of adversities
I see you fighting
Far across the valley
Never once flinching
Never once failing
Strong as you are
I still feel compelled to rush to you,
Though I know it's your fight,
And should I be,
I have to be there in the end,
To take you back,
Where you belong,
And shield you from further blows....
I want to do that now....
And not for this moment....
But forever!!

37 comments:

Aashi Joshi said...

you dont need to fall in love namesake......if you do...i wonder about howd u go about writing then...this lady within you has a million dollar effect upon your writings buddy.... ;)


plus ur scorp trait shows here yet again.. :P lolzzzzzzzz.....

but really awesum work..... :)

Sam said...

lolzzz.......... but then u may never know!! :D
but den... though this one has the romantic intonations... it fit into all situations, where you want to protect the people you love and care for and yet helpless
for some battles are meant for the individual alone.... and one should just stand by and watch
lest the individual falls.... for then you have to step up and do what your heart has always bid you to do.... to shield till they can fight again!!

something as simple as appearing for your exams!!

and wots with this scorp trait!! its nromal human behaviour!! the way you keep going at times i think i am a scorp adn not a libran!! :P

Cuckoo said...

Lovely Lovely lines Sam, Oh fellow libran !!

I liked your writing very much. Yeah, it fits in both the situations... romantic to hai hee.. otherwise also. There could be many situations... I thought it as in a parent watching a toddler learning to walk.

Good work. Keep posting.

Sam said...

hey thnx cuckoo.......... great to have a comment from u...
and u r right it does fit into so many situations!!

Shruti said...

Beautiful..
Cant have words to say anything , becoz words wont be able to do justice..

Take care

sam said...

thnx shruti.... as they say even silence has a song of it's own....

Dazzy said...

ur words say a lot, dats wat i always say..they convey a lot of meaning even though less is spoken of, a lot is felt...it surprises me..ALWAYS...

Sam said...

ah well... u knw me.. am very lazy!! :P so have to make it up in some way or the other you knw!! :P
glad u liked it so much!!

Jewel Rays said...

*sighs.. How i wish i would have someone do that for me at times. Yet sometimes i just have to stand on my own and fight my own good fight.

Great poem.

~Jewel

Sam said...

Well... Jewel, some stuff are always meant for us to do... nad those who love us can only stand by and watch!! It's tough... but it always has to be done!!

Vandita said...

hey lovely poem sam ... and as so many ppl rightly said, it does fit into so many situations....i personally just love the underlying feel :)

Keshi said...

Sam wud u be my BF? ;-) gawwwwwd this is so romantic! U'd make a good lover some day...

Keshi.

DumBum said...

sam!!! tat ws lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!! its so romantic!!! do u mind if i send it to tanuj on his bday card??? [:D] oh my god!!! this is so awesome!!!

sam said...

@vands: knwing u, i ws kinda expecting dat u'd lyk dis one... thnx a ton!!

@mann:lolzzz.... god! u gush so much!! naywyz, regarding sending it across totanuj on his b'day.... umm... lemme think abt it!!

@keshi: uh huh!! someone fell in luv wid teh poem!! :)
i wish keshi, at least some of the girls were as sensible as u r :P
u knw wot i mean!! ;)

Superunknown said...

My URL has now changed to :

http://milliondollarexpressions.blogspot.com/

--Superunknown

Jaded said...

We take lil time in our lives to peer out of our own existence...its a "me" world...and it felt so great to read abt protecting someone...supporting somebody else's cause...and the best part was taking them back and keeping them shielded...forver!

absolutely loved the poem...loved the sentiments...

Keep writing...as i said last time...i know there's lotsa good stuff coming from u!

sam said...

hey super, will update the link for you!!

jaded, u leave me with big time question mark always.... anywyz, i'm glad u lykd my work... and ur thoughts r wonderful too.... btw, why do i alwyz get this feeling that u knw me personally and playing hide and seek from me??

Jaded said...

okie...
lets erase the question mark...u know me very very very well! my intention wasn't to play hide and seek, but u never caught me...strange!

Neeraja said...

wow im only 2 days late and there r 18 comments already :O

Absolutely loved the poem!!! esp the last few lines...totally in love with it.I want more :D

Btw, read ur cbox..ure not well?? kya hua tujhe? get well real soon..im looking forward to more such romantic poems!

Sam said...

I do????
alrite...gimme a hint!!

Sam said...

arre.... got a bad bout of flu.. so recovering from it now... a lil weak dats all!!
and am glad u liked teh poem..
btw, 18 comments is actually decent enuf.... for i have one day and nearly a 100 comments!!

Madhavi said...

Hello sir...watte say.....juz fab..n nedless 2 say ne more....luvd each n evrythng..forever n forever wl cherish ur wrk man...way 2 go..n gt wel soon.......n 10 kya u blessed wid 1000000000 of it...:D
keep it goin

Sam said...

lolzzz................. thnx mads!! u r a doll......

DumBum - Wonderfully Wierd said...

rite sam... hv u thot abt it??? [:P] n i gush bcz its romantic... n it made me smile... ive nt hd too many f those moments f late... bt neways... yeh rone waali baaton ko maar goli... tell me... cn i send it?

Superunknown said...

Sam, the blogcamp site is right on the pbwiki....Wud fwd ya the link...Meanwhile the poem was good, a bit the snap was in DDLJ style...WOW!!!

Madhavi said...

Oh sam....u n al my frnds hw many times time n again u put me up on such a pedestal..:p n make me go all d way......pink pink rosy pinkly blush:D bt I luv it..acha naam hai luvd it:) n abt d poem sach me bahut hi chweet hai n romantism ki baat ho rhi hai n m nowhr m alwyz der..aakhir im big romantic 2..;)

Jaded said...

hey,
read my latest post...u'd know me!

Sam said...

@dumbum: i think i gave you my views on it!! temme wot u think abt dat!!

@super: hey thanks!! and do fwd me the link!! :)

@mads: lolzzz........ am glad u lykd it so much!!

@jaded: i already did.... is it rima???

Jaded said...

hmm...wonder why did it take u so long...it is me - rima!

Sam said...

well.. lady, till now der never was any clue??

messys musings said...

sweet post :)))

n thanx for the compliments on my blog... i hope ur doing good now... missed u at buf.. was fun will put up pics there in a few days time...

Sam said...

i am doing good. thnx for asking!!
and i wud be looking forward to teh pics.... btw, heard der wud be a blogcamp here at pune on 7th... u guys coming??

sahil said...

lovely poem sam...you have a talent for writing definitely..and your poems always touch a chord..its amazing..keep writing man, its special...

sahil said...

one more thing...honestly, tell me - are u in love with some lucky girl..or is this just some lady in your head that inspires you?

Sam said...

hey sahil, am really pleased to know that teh poem was able to touch you!! As for me being in love... well... lemme stay quiet about it... if it's so, you'll definitely know!! :)

Pijush said...

Ohh Sam, you are playing diplomatically :-) Lovely Poem, just touched my heart. Well done

Sam said...

Ah!! I love to play it diplomatically........ :D
and thnx for your comment on that poem!!