Thursday, April 23, 2009

Swish...

sharp n cold, swish n thrust;
small n fast, swish n fire;
long n hard, swish n hit;
wet n warm, swish n blood;
sad n cold, swish n die!!

13 comments:

Keshi said...

**sad n cold, swish n die!!

sad n cold, swish n die, n live again!

:)

Hows u Sam?

Keshi.

Sumit said...

:)
Am doing good Keshi, just a bit stressed out for the forthcoming week. would be fine by next friday though. :D

Phoenix said...

aah exam pressure makes one want to vent out... wonderful expression!! :)

all the very best for your studies.. you will do well..just take time off relax and get back to books with a calm mind.. dont stress yourself!!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

pretty aggressive :-) but really cool ;-)

utopia said...

hahah! wonder what that was about.

Chronicwriter said...

do you write posts after getting drunk too bro?

nice one

www.chronicwriter.com

Sumit said...

@utopia: oh simple, sword, gun, stick, blod n death :)

@chronicwriter: not really. call it exam stress if u must... :D
cheers mate!!

Kartz said...

Ah... That was something different! Especially line 2. & Looking at what you've written up there, I guess exams are making people a lot more creative! Seeing this trend in bloggersville these days. ;)

Keep writing. Spread the voice.

Bonne chance!

Peace.

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Greetings Sumit,

Thank you for stopping-by to leave a note. I appreciate your time and hope to see you more often.

Peace. Have a nice day.

Sumit said...

thank you for dropping by. and yes, there does happen the odd bout of creativity. :)
recharges the batteries to be honest.

J said...

Your latest post made me read this post and I like the words.

Sumit said...

:)
thanks J. How are you doing?

ARUNA said...

something different, but short, simple n nice post!

Sumit said...

thank you for dropping by n am glad u liked it. :)