standing silently over yonder hills,
staring into the open sky,
and smiling secretly at the treasure,
she would now own,
she didn't yield to it's touch,
she smiled softly in return,
the unspoken feelings rising through,
a heart full of dreams,
and a mind willing to wander,
that's how she was today,
standing silently over yonder hills.
19 comments:
Hmmmm...yeh another masterstroke frm the ultimate fella...Sam..just one word..simply super...ab main saare adjectives bhool gyi hu..har baar ek hi cheez likh k bore ho gyi hu..:P jokes apart..
'smiling secretly at the treasure she would now own'...no words buddy....nw u get whn I say bouncer mat pheka kar.;)
Well... all I can say is thanks!! :)
this is such a beautiful poem :)
Good imagery :)
thnks raaji!! :)
its a relly nice poem...
and she's beautiful.
Keshi.
Beautiful! And no, she isnt silent at all. :)
Beautiful ...yet again!:)
dint know u'd already put it up here
*amiles and cheers*
Welcome netym yaar :)
@mann and pri: thnx guys!!
@keshi and phoenix: whom are you two talking abt???
lols Sam the SHE ur talking abt ofcourse!
Keshi.
hello bro...
that's a really beautiful poem...really nice!
i can start with adjectives, but the silent unsaid feeling that the poem conveys, i don't think my vocab of adjectives is going to do any justice to it.
cheerio..
@keshi: lol...
@jaded: ah!! finally i see you writing something!!
thanx a lot!!
Writing gettin better with time mate......Is it poetry or some inspiration drawn from that feeling called L....
Keep writing.....
duhhhhh Sam! :)
Keshi stares at Sam in total disbelief.
LOL!
Keshi.
So peaceful and enlighting...
Take care
@tugga: Dunno, how it's getting better!! It's good as long as it keeps on improving.. least bothered about the reason ;)
@keshi: woteva!! :D
@shruti: thnx!! after a long time!!
hmmm nice and so soft...kinda leaves one with a calming effect doesnt it..:)
gud gng namesake...........althou i wonder wat was it tht she achieved.......but then lets leave tht for individuals to think for themselves shall we!!.. :)
keep flowing tht ink...or rather moving those fingertips... :P
nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
u are not as confused as you claim to be!!!
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