Tuesday, August 07, 2007

Standing Silently!!

And there she was,
standing silently over yonder hills,
staring into the open sky,
and smiling secretly at the treasure,
she would now own,
Though the breeze kissed her softly,
she didn't yield to it's touch,
she smiled softly in return,
the unspoken feelings rising through,
a heart full of dreams,
and a mind willing to wander,
that's how she was today,
standing silently over yonder hills.

19 comments:

Madhavi said...

Hmmmm...yeh another masterstroke frm the ultimate fella...Sam..just one word..simply super...ab main saare adjectives bhool gyi hu..har baar ek hi cheez likh k bore ho gyi hu..:P jokes apart..
'smiling secretly at the treasure she would now own'...no words buddy....nw u get whn I say bouncer mat pheka kar.;)

Sam said...

Well... all I can say is thanks!! :)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

this is such a beautiful poem :)
Good imagery :)

Sam said...

thnks raaji!! :)

FireWhisky said...

its a relly nice poem...

Keshi said...

and she's beautiful.

Keshi.

Phoenix said...

Beautiful! And no, she isnt silent at all. :)

Pri said...

Beautiful ...yet again!:)
dint know u'd already put it up here

*amiles and cheers*

Madhavi said...

Welcome netym yaar :)

Sam said...

@mann and pri: thnx guys!!

@keshi and phoenix: whom are you two talking abt???

Keshi said...

lols Sam the SHE ur talking abt ofcourse!

Keshi.

Jaded said...

hello bro...
that's a really beautiful poem...really nice!
i can start with adjectives, but the silent unsaid feeling that the poem conveys, i don't think my vocab of adjectives is going to do any justice to it.
cheerio..

Sam said...

@keshi: lol...

@jaded: ah!! finally i see you writing something!!
thanx a lot!!

Tugga said...

Writing gettin better with time mate......Is it poetry or some inspiration drawn from that feeling called L....

Keep writing.....

Keshi said...

duhhhhh Sam! :)

Keshi stares at Sam in total disbelief.

LOL!
Keshi.

Shruti said...

So peaceful and enlighting...

Take care

Sam said...

@tugga: Dunno, how it's getting better!! It's good as long as it keeps on improving.. least bothered about the reason ;)

@keshi: woteva!! :D

@shruti: thnx!! after a long time!!

Aashi said...

hmmm nice and so soft...kinda leaves one with a calming effect doesnt it..:)

gud gng namesake...........althou i wonder wat was it tht she achieved.......but then lets leave tht for individuals to think for themselves shall we!!.. :)

keep flowing tht ink...or rather moving those fingertips... :P

shooting star said...

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....
u are not as confused as you claim to be!!!