Saturday, July 28, 2007

Done Wrong??

The clouds always come in
Promising rain on a barren land
But instead,
Cause a storm hitherto unseen.
She looked up at the sky,
The sun blazing down on her,
Wondering when would
The skies open up....
And drench her to the core
And may be hide her tears!!
She stared into the unseen
A heart full of Desires...
Yet to be realised
And a hope that refuses to die.
They say,
"Wish with a true heart,
And your dreams will come true".
Isn't that's what she had been doing?
Then why doesn't it rain?
What has she done wrong??

26 comments:

INDR's Angels said...

simple and splendid.
Good one.
:)

Pri said...

"wish with a true heart,
and your dreams will come true"

not always! :)
and when they dont, it hurts real bad...
sometimes envy those ppl who dont dream!

nice one buddy!:)
keep up the good writing!

CATTIE said...

awwww....dat described emotions so plaintively

sam said...

@indrajit: hey thnx for your visit!! :)
welcome.. you are a pretty good poet yourself... i liked your Utopia!! splendid work...
keep visiting!!

@Pri: hey girl.... i agree. but den if you don't dream wid a true heart will u really strive for it to come true??

@cattie: hey long time!! wer have u been??

Madhavi said...

Hey sam...
wat a simplistic beauty yaar this post has...:d evry time hit d nail buddy...indeed i so agree wid u...one has to strive for al dreams n make them into desires n those wished wid a true heart....... :)

Oracle said...

so simply and expressively said!

Keshi said...

Can someone tell me wuts going on in BUF?????????

Keshi.

Cuckoo said...

"Then why doesn't it rain?
What has she done wrong??"
So simple & so true.

Sam, maza aa gaya. Keep writing such stuff.

Vandita said...

eternal question buddy... and so beautifully phrased :)
simple and splendid!!

Phoenix said...

they say "Wish with a true heart and your dreams will come true"
and it's right.
Only notice: they are clever. They never mention a time frame.

Aashi said...

simple yet strong...


but i dunno........somethingwas left unsaid.......




mabbe thts the charm of it...but sumthing was missing namesake

Sam said...

@mads: hey girl... thnx a lot...

@oracle: dats how the most complex things shud b put forth don't u think?

@keshi: if u can.. ping me on yahoo... the id is there on my blogger profile...

@cuckoo: i learnt it from the master!! :D

@vands: thnx :)

@phoenix: isn't dat the beauty?? tests ur character if i am not mistaken!! :)

@aashi: hey wb!! well... there is a lot left unsaid... like say teh wait invloved...

Rashi said...

I am floored, i liked the use of 'she' in here...the sparklin' eys and...

awesome !

Rashi said...

its a b'ful blog !

Sam said...

hey rashi thanks a lot!! urs is wonderful too... watch out for me tomorrow.... cheerio!!

Keshi said...

tnxx Sam!

Ish emailed me everything. Now I know wut happened.

Keshi.

Sam said...

good to knw dat... am glad i didn't have to talk abt it!! :)
cheers
sam

Sweetstickychewy said...

Were u talking about me? cause i am that girl. My hope never dies and i believe i will see it come true. At least thats what my spirit shouts!

love it SAM!Great stuff

Sam said...

errr.... I didn't really have anyone particular in mind.. just thought that it might true for so many ppl out there!!
and am so glad you liked it.. :)

Sweetstickychewy said...

Sam..I was just dramaing..I know its not about me.lol! Sides, you don't really know me too.

Sam said...

errr.... dats true.. i don't know you.. but with yes.. i'll know you!! dats a promise!! :)

Sweetstickychewy said...

what with the err...?

Sam said...

nothing just like dat... you like that??
err........ !! :D

annie said...

"wish with a true heart,
and your dreams will come true"

I have been wishin & wishin....and...

Nice poem though & thnx for droppin bi :)

Sam said...

oh!! you are welcome!! it was an inetersting read!! and thnx for your compliments!!

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