tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post5085154998969793184..comments2024-03-05T04:49:06.003+00:00Comments on Thoughts of a confused mind: Ijaazat (Permission) - an Incomplete Story (contd.)Samhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06394200137631383145noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-74950260699368073202007-06-04T11:56:00.000+01:002007-06-04T11:56:00.000+01:00hmmmmm.....just saw this namesake...i'd lyk to thi...hmmmmm.....just saw this namesake...i'd lyk to think abt this too but id lyjkta see ur version frankly...coz really this is ur story :)Aashihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03124657759822689180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-44218343498135824682007-05-12T07:27:00.000+01:002007-05-12T07:27:00.000+01:00Thxs sam.....A lot Sam [:)]Bt u shudnt hve put me ...Thxs sam.....A lot Sam [:)]Bt u shudnt hve put me on asuch a big pedestal...nwyz :P...waitng 4ur build up soon..:)<BR/><BR/><BR/>Mads.The 'Mad' Orchidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02016978661439997583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-58412985560000032582007-05-11T16:13:00.000+01:002007-05-11T16:13:00.000+01:00mads, u r a sweetheart!!u got teh very flow of my ...mads, u r a sweetheart!!<BR/>u got teh very flow of my idea.... and have given me a wonderful situation, to move ahead.. lemme see if i can build up on this over the weekend!!<BR/>thnx a lot!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-14793120625691438742007-05-11T15:26:00.000+01:002007-05-11T15:26:00.000+01:00Hmmmmmmm...i c...dis is smthng Sam...Ok i wud proc...Hmmmmmmm...i c...dis is smthng Sam...Ok i wud procee like this hope u like it :P as Sam has already said that already 4 yrs of their marriage is over n now lets assume that widin a span of say 2weeks frm now they r gonna step into their 5th year...N now cmng bck 2 "THECALL" &after wich d follows strts n Aditya gets d pang of suspect n wt makes him repent n say A part of me died..was that widout even thinkng once abt his 4yrs of blissful mariage he followd Sulakshana n found out that she has met up a Manager of a hotel..n is making plans for their upcmng Marriage anniversary..since it bein their 5th yr she wants 2 make it abstly special & so is busy arrangng abt all d neccessary stuffs...n also overhears her saying to the manager 2 make evrythng perfect n nuthg should go wrong she wanted 2 give Aditya d best of erythng this year...realisng his mistake n thinkng abt sulakshana's immense love n moreover wid guilt hoverng abt &al other thots occupied in mind he leaves d spot n is thinkng how cud he do so..............<BR/>I guess i hve said quite bit n sum1 cn contribute 2.....Hope this adds smthng 2 sam's perfect story...The 'Mad' Orchidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02016978661439997583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-31700040036578438592007-05-11T05:52:00.000+01:002007-05-11T05:52:00.000+01:00hey vands!! give it a shot..... lemme see wer u ta...hey vands!! give it a shot..... lemme see wer u take it... c'mon!!<BR/><BR/>"a prt of me died" - well let's say he lost wot he loved the most!!<BR/>maybe becoz of his own mistake??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-73329531089026641982007-05-10T19:29:00.000+01:002007-05-10T19:29:00.000+01:00haha mann u gave my name ... for inspiration...wai...haha mann u gave my name ... for inspiration...<BR/>waise sumit gr8 build up...i thot u were gonna say the next part is comin up or something....<BR/>i wud ask u the same question, " a part of me died" meanin?...<BR/>i can continue the story though with whatever comes to my mind but then this is ur visualisation, i wanna know what aditya saw when he followed his wife... what made him feel that it was a mistake.<BR/>cmon give it a shot...will be waiting eagerly :)IncorrigibleVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01484955354089378277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-74693545589170090982007-05-10T10:01:00.000+01:002007-05-10T10:01:00.000+01:00er...i cant handle curiosity:(er...i cant handle curiosity:(Confrontation!https://www.blogger.com/profile/15254666344810066745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-8540750227892629092007-05-09T08:06:00.000+01:002007-05-09T08:06:00.000+01:00still come up with something!! this stuff ahs been...still come up with something!! this stuff ahs been lying around like this for nearly two years now!! :(Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-41055810485367756882007-05-09T07:40:00.000+01:002007-05-09T07:40:00.000+01:00Im hooked onto it..already! As far as ideas r conc...Im hooked onto it..already! As far as ideas r concerned, only u know what exactly u mean by "a part of u died"..some accident?? some bad news?? what exactly?? im with mann...no good with storiesneershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03539928159183287799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37282400.post-313914374963115542007-05-09T03:48:00.000+01:002007-05-09T03:48:00.000+01:00wow... tats an awesome beginning and build-up... u...wow... tats an awesome beginning and build-up... unfortunately im nt very gud wid stories... :( m gona wait 4 vands, bonnie n d othrs 2 come up wid somethin gain some inspiration from em n give ya some ideas...Occasional Brilliancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01920938071016465521noreply@blogger.com